Kourin

[kourin]

Name: Kourin

Alias: To Shinigami: Subject 0201 Vizard Pet Name: Ru-Rin

Age:Lost count but over 600 years.

Gender: Female

Faction: Other

Rank: None

PvP Availability: No

Description:

Height: 4 Feet
Weight: 130 lbs
Noticeable Features: Has ears of a cat and two twin tails.

Reiatsu Color: Dark Green

Personality: A crafty lady in general due to her special case

[Karzan Zaraki]

I believe it says the faction leader of intended faction may post in character reg threads.

Okay just a heads up. Normal Hollows, no matter what level, do not look like Humans. A few Adjuchas, and Vasto Lordes have humanoid shapes, but what you want here is a no no.

You're Reiatsu cannot be a "?" it needs a number value, and your starting stat count should total 300 points if you're a regular Hollow, 350 if you're a Gillian, 400 if you are an Adjucha, or 440 if you are a Vasto Lorde.

Immortality is a no no. That should be a given in any RP.

As for your skills and what not...I have not the qualifications to grade you on those, but all that other stuff is what's most likely going to come up when a mod gets to this.

[kourin]

It's acutally Immorality with a price in short she can't increase her stats because of it as they will remain the way they are until she meets her soul quota.

As for the ? It just means that her reiatsu can increase to any level but she can't use it to oppress or be oppressed by another reiatsu. Also one of her abilities bares her from using any energy attacks so mainly just for scare tactic if it doesn't work she really has no chance against anyone ^^;

In short this character is actually an anomaly of sorts and will change into a Vastro Lorde if she meets her soul quota, the immorality and her other abilities are actually just tricks to get away from any predator she encounters or those that simple want to and not to abuse in anyway. I just kinda wanted to create a comic relief villain kinda character that didn't have much repercussions and to be thwarted daily ^^;

[Karzan Zaraki]

I understand that, but your character is breaking the rules of the RP. The system is in place for a good reason, ignoring the rules of the system, even if it makes it harder on your character, isn't something that can be allowed, because if one exception is made, others will expect exceptions for their characters. Also, having your character reach Vasto Lorde in such a way, is very off track from what a Hollow is. I'm just warning you, this character is very unlikely to be approved, because not only does it not fall under any of the character categories, but it breaks rules.

[kourin]

I know but I already know I could create a character that is all abiding to the rules but this is something I just wanted to try I don't mind if it ends up failing all together i'm even willing to make her completely controlled by the admins yes and no even somehow for some reason her reincarnation somehow fails and she is killed.

I'd like to try and see if they would allow it if not I'll just have to try an think of a alternative.

[Karzan Zaraki]

Well, if by some miracle its approved, my character will probably find her useful for something or other, so don't expect her to be left alone

[MeressXIII]

No immorality. The Freakshow has spoke.

[kourin]

Well changed quite a bit since the immorality idea didn't last long well here's the rundown of what's change hopefully got everything but you can double check if you want not sure if I got all in my bio.

-Reverse Calamity replaced with Infinity Laberinth
-All death related things removed from profile


Although you said no immorality you didn't exactly complain my other abilities so i'll assume those are still under consideration well renovated hopefully this is good ^^

[yachirukusajishi]

Welcome to KK!

Thanks for the input guys. *glares a bit*

But what they said pretty much is what I would have said.

No immortality! Under any circumstances.

That means anything and everything linking to that needs to disappear.

Next is the stats. If you gonna be a Hollow you need to adjust your stats to such. You can't have adjustable reiatsu.

Oh I forgot. You can't have that much of a humanoid appearance as a hollow. Maybe as a Vasto Lorde and defiantly as an Arrancar but not as a regular hollow.

Lastly you have a set amount of skills you start out with. Use them. It's a lot easier to develop your character that way.

I understand if you don't want to fix all this and want to start all over but please send me a pm if you decide to do this. So I can delete this thread.

[kourin]

I've gutted "Lost Way" and decided to acutally put stats though i'm not sure how much to put since I didn't really want Kourin to have much but since she's a combonation of spirit and hollow I should probable ask first how much I can put into her or just use Hollow's stats and skills as a template?

[MeressXIII]

This Profile will be looked over ASAP.
We're sorry for making you wait so long.

[kourin]

Okay...since my question has been um postponed I'm going on a limp here and saying 240 stats is okay ^^' just say so if not and I'll modify it or just lower the reiatsu to match the preferred starting stats.

[yachirukusajishi]

I apologize for taking so long to get here. I would have looked over it sooner than Monday morning but I had a busy weekend and week. So.

You need to choose what Faction your character belongs too. Once you decide that you need to choose the proper stats to start out with and how many and what skills to go along with it. We do not have a faction that is Spirit or Cat. Although we do have a "cat" he is in the Shinigami faction. So please fix this.

[kourin]

She's primarily a hollow so i'll just use that template to save time the others were just to well put out her origins more bluntly without having to read the whole history ^^; But she is different from the standardize weaker hollow's but just put her under such to save time.

[Karzan Zaraki]

Alright, still the problem of your characters appearance. If you want a Hollow with a humanoid appearance, than your an Arrancar, its that simple. You can make her a weaker Arrancar, but she's not a Hollow, because Hollow's of any rank, do not look as human as your character clearly does.

If you insist on her being a "normal" Hollow, I suggest some kind of disguise ability, similar to the thing Grandfisher does with the weird antenna thing he had when he was still a regular Hollow.


And to Cheerful + other mods: *stare*

[kourin]

[sigh] she isn't a normal hollow for the 5th time i'm just using the ordinary hollow as a template because most of the other ideas were rejected though I understood where you guys were coming from but this was an endevour outside the common bleach hollow know how but I really just feel she has been nickpicked to death and would probable be better off just dropping the endevor sorry

[Karzan Zaraki]

Then the faction for this should be "Other" since I believe that is where spiritual oddities are supposed to go.

And I'm sorry that everyone "nitpicked" at your character, but it was breaking rules to which there are no exceptions. This forum is very particular when it concerns character applications, and the strangest thing I've seen to exist in this place are the soon to be extinct Onigami which were invented specifically for this forum, and I honestly doubt there's any Bleach forum that would have accepted that character as it originally was.

[yachirukusajishi]

What exactly are you planning to do with this character? Since you erased a big chunk of the profile.